I Have an argument eesay About losing weight by diet or surrgier
I support The diet side
the edit i need in this essay is
put an example that shows i have a good experience with diet
I have a example in my essay i highlight it in green.try to keep it in the way that i wrote but in sametime try to chage it to support diet.
i highlight the area that need work in yellow. ( use the same sourses that i used )
KEEP THE CONCLUSIN BUT TRY TO EXTAND IT TO MAKE THE ESSAY IN 5 FULL Pgs
use plz easy words as english is my second language, ad keep it in same my writing style easy word and sentance with good grammer.
i attached my promt and my essay
do not use words ( you, alot ,thing )
the essay due in 12 hrs
the essay should be in 5 pgs mla form