essay review

essay review

check grammar, sentence structure, flow… And I want you to evaluate my essay and give suggestion how to change it better (specifically)

My mom always says to me, “You lazy beggar!! Stop watching TV and get out from that bed.Do some productive things!!” And I agree with my mom that I am a lazy person.But I have an excuse for being lazy. My laziness will eventually lead to the Fourth Revolution.When other people hear this by chance, it sounds like a weird and stupid. A lots of countries and people regard patience, sincerity and diligence as natural virtue. These sayings, ‘Many a little makes a mickle’, or Korean saying ‘if you sleep three hours, you pass exam. If you sleep five hours, you fail,’ all reflectthe successstory of diligence, which is opposite meaning of laziness.

But I believe this invincible formula, success story of diligence, will be eventually challenged.The person like me who just likes to lie down on the bed and do nothing will become pioneer of the development of the technology; and the laziness will be the motivation of the development. I am not saying the virtue of diligence is wrong. But the paradigm of industry is changing, technology and innovation is changing our lives day by day. I believe in the near future, it will be more important for the people to have ability to order computers, not learn what computers can learn. For this kind of world, it should be diligence for laziness, not diligence for diligence.

I felt this strongly when I was doing summer internship in a Fintech startup company. Fintech is an industry that uses new technology and innovation with available resources in order to compete in the marketplace of traditional financial institutions. To sum up, since people are so lazy they do not want go to bank to withdraw money and give it to a friend for paying for dinner, companies made the online banks. People, however, are so lazy that they feel online banking system is so cumbersome. For these kind of people,the company that I did internship came up with solution. That is, during internship, I had to make algorithm that helps and save these lazy people.I realized that the innovation for this industry, in fact, comes from laziness. Not only this industry, but also many other industries are doing same thing — saving lazy people. All the industries are developing in the sake of laziness, so that people can just watch Netflix all day.  In other words, this world is heading to ‘do not lift a hand’ world.

Paradoxically, to achieve ‘laziness.’ andto save lazy people, someone must have to be diligent. Someone must be curious and passionate by asking questions how can achieve more laziness. Someone must concern whether there is more

more efficient and convenient way to change the original system or mindset.

I hope that ‘someone’ can be me. And I believe to become ‘someone’, first I need to learn. I realized during internship and doing research that I need more knowledge and intuition to change the system more efficient. I need to learn how to approach this more systematically. But I cannot achieve this in my current college, since this college does not offer courses on these subjects. Therefore, I need to transfer to learn and study what I need, and to achieve my goal: laziness.

Essay Question

Essay Question!

Question description


In a five paragraph essay, apply ONE ethical theory to decide the moral course of action in the medical case of the premature twins studied in class (see link below)

In the video, philosophers applied the three major ethical principles you learned in this class: Kant’s Categorical Imperative, Utilitarianism, and Virtue Ethics.

Apply ONLY ONE ethical theory to decide a moral course of action, and to support your arguments throughout the entire essay.

Not using the ethical theory results in an automatic zero. Using more than one ethical theory results in an automatic zero.

Essay question Our supervisor has been asked to give a presentation on the effects of the Americans with Disabilities Act

Essay question Our supervisor has been asked to give a presentation on the effects of the Americans with Disabilities Act , writing homework help


Question description 

1. Our supervisor has been asked to give a presentation on the effects of the Americans with Disabilities Act (ADA) on employer discrimination at an upcoming conference. She has asked your team to research recent court decisions and analyze the impact the ADA is having in the workplace. She will create her presentation based on your findings. Individual deliverable: 1-2 pages (45 points possible): Use the Library or other web resources to locate a recent court decision involving the Americans With Disabilities Act (ADA). Summarize the relevant facts of the case Discuss how the ADA applies to this case

2. Using APA style format, write a paper of 4-5 pages describing the provisions of the following major labor laws as well as their impact on organizations and the union-management relationship:

The Railway Labor Act
The Norris-La Guardia Act
The Wagner Act
The Taft-Hartley Act
The Landrum-Griffin Act

Submitting your assignment in APA format means, at a minimum, you will need the following: Title page: Remember the running head and title in all capital letters. Abstract: This is a summary of your paper, not an introduction. Begin writing in third-person voice. Body: The body of your paper begins on the page following the title page and abstract page, and it must be double-spaced between paragraphs. The typeface should be 12-pt. Times Roman or 12-pt. Courier in regular black type. Do not use color, bold type, or italics except as required for APA level headings and references. The deliverable length of the body of your paper for this assignment is 4–5 pages. In-text academic citations to support your decisions and analysis are required. A variety of academic sources is encouraged. Reference page: References that align with your in-text academic sources are listed on the final page of your paper. The references must be in APA format using appropriate spacing, hang indention, italics, and upper- and lower-case usage as appropriate for the type of resource used. Remember, the reference page is not a bibliography, but it is a further listing of the abbreviated in-text citations used in the paper. Every referenced item must have a corresponding in-text citation

essay on your personal worldview

essay on your personal worldview, writing homework help


Question description 

Write an 800-1,000 word essay on your personal worldview. Briefly discuss the various possible meanings of the term “spirituality,” and your understanding of the concepts of pluralism, scientism, and postmodernism. Primarily, address the following seven basic worldview questions:

  1. What is prime reality?
  2. What is the nature of the world around you?
  3. What is a human being?
  4. What happens to a person at death?
  5. Why is it possible to know anything at all?
  6. How do people know what is right or wrong?
  7. What is the meaning of human history?

Prepare this assignment according to the APA guidelines found in the APA Style Guide, located in the Student Success Center. An abstract is not required.

Essay on Domestic Violence

Essay on Domestic Violence

Write a three to four (3-4) page paper in which you describe the problem, need, or process in question. This should be a detailed overview of the topic you have chosen. Include at least two (2) sources to support your informative essay.


cultural analysis

cultural analysis

paragraphs each begin with a short quote from the
passage to which you will respond. You will want to have 3
5 body paragraphs
beginning with a short quote followed by your cultural analysis. Remember the
sample essay we looked at on the overhead in class.
Add a conclusion that provides a sense of closure. Include your reflection of the
of the essay as it relates to the world and to your personal
experience. Such as, some cultures eat insects because there are no mammals in
their environment. Remember to
be respectful of other cultures’
beliefs and
practices as you write. Think critically about your own beliefs and practices.
See the reverse side for the Outline you should use as well as the Grading Rubric for this
of your Reader Response:
the author’s name and title
of the essay, then t
he author’s thesis
of the essay in 2 or 3 sentences
from the essay (see your Handbook for punctuation)
reaction to the quote
Your statement of
what you learned
about the people of that country
ding stmt. of the
of essay in the world.
Grading Rubric: You can receive a possible 4 points on each of these criteria:
to instructions
of the reading
of your introduction, your responses, and your conclusion
of your bo
(response) paragraphs, including each quote
: Have you used the 3 topic headings (the 3 elements of the outline,
above) to organize your response? Have you used your Handbook to check
punctuation of your quotations?



writings homework help

writings homework help

I Have to identify my favorite quote and discuss its significance to me.

This is my favorite quote by john f.Kennedy : “ever accomplishment starts with a decision to try.”

Include this qoute in the essay. I want you to explain in the essay that qout.

Ive worked on my essay already and i need help with tying this qoute in to my essay. I also need help with making changes editing, and adding things to the essay to make it eyecatching and descriptive …. Please have excellent writing skills.




Identify your favorite quote and please discuss its significance to you

Identify your favorite quote and please discuss its significance to you.

This is my favorite quote by john f. Kennedy :every accomplishment starts with a decision to try.
Things become possible when an attempt is made. Any success does not mean that the road to
it is smooth. It all depends on an attempt and being positive regardless of the predicted end.I
never thought about going to college and getting a degree. Going to college never interest me.
But then I realized that I wanted to be successful and start a career in which I loved instead of
working odd jobs just to make money. I decided to go to college in 2014. Life on campus never
entertained me, in 2015 I went through difficult situations in my life. I just didn’t feel motivated.
The reason why was I was reflecting on the past. Back in 2014 I was sexually assulated and I
was having flashbacks. I didnt feel happy, all i wanted to do was stay home and do nothing, i
think the reason why I was reflecting on the past was because i had no friends and didnt know
know who i could talk to to express myself. My grades weren’t good at all. Most people
including myself thought I was not in my right state of mind.
However, this was not permanent for I was able to walk over it. I realized my purpose of
going to school so I decided to remain focused in school. In spring 2016,I put in the effort and
made sure that I did what I needed to do to pass all of my classes, I managed to get As and Bs.
And now I’m graduating this semester. I plan on going straight to a four-year school to get my
bachelors and then graduate school to get my masters. I am going to college for a purpose, an
agenda to develop a career and to assist the society, specifically the young children who have
trouble speaking. The main goal, in this case, is to be able to motivate the young children to help
develop their ability to speak at early stages.
It may seem difficult but I believe that the motivation I obtained in school will make me
determined. I know that there will be challenges but I have already made a decision to pursue my
dreams in becoming a speech pathologist

Essay Grading

Essay Grading, writing homework help

Hi, good morning

I need someone has an experience to do a rationale essay for my first draft.

So, I’m going to upload two attachment that have my first draft essay and A,B,C,D rational to help you mark the essay.

Please I want an expert for this assignment and it should done by 5 hours at least. If any an expert wants to help me to do the assignments , I have only 5 hours, it shouldn’t has any plagiarism or non academic vocabulary.

Thanks so much

Essay from nature perspective

Essay from nature perspective, English homework help


a.  Retell “An Episode of War” from nature’s perspective


b.  Retell the excerpt you read from Moby Dick from nature’s perspective